Fanfict

[Colonel_mustang 0]

sup all dis is mai fanfic hope yall like it...

Gnatmus (mustang naked around) drew is katana, there were five cannoneers. before the vcaacnnors can strike gnatmus slices them all and they die. then e does a backfliup and saves kenji from the blasts 'are you okay' said gnatmus kenji say 'yes i am alright, thank u' gnautms: 'i wil always remain loyal to you my liord.'

but there was hiffen gun! ontly there was wuick runners, they drew the idden gun and shot kenji in sholor kife! kluncky there the sholder kinife protect, then gnatmus attacked therese men, and kill. THE END.

[Colonel_mustang 0]

The Battle Realms Manga:

Shinske's early past 0.5, part 1 of the Battle Realms Manga.

Shinske woke up, his thin body sweating from the nightmare. He dreamed that he was taken away from his family and locked in a dungeon, never to escape. Realising it was only his imagination, he dragged his lightly-tanned legs and set them on the wooden floorboards. He then brang his torso upright, that as well being tanned and starting to show signs of manliness.

Shinske was a young boy, the strongest of the field behind his father, who was a muscular man. His hands were crass and calloused from working too many hours in the rice paddies, his body tanned by the mild sun. Overall his figure was gaunt and lean, but still strong. His face was typical of a Serpant Clan youth, his hair jet black and cut short of his dome. The bones of his face were well-defined, and gave him a somewhat manly figure.

Shintaro was a local raider, his arms powerful from over-training, his skin scarred from over-fighting. His face was grave and sunken, sorely wrinkled from stress, and across his left eye an ugly, red scar that was the result of a vicious accident. At night, when he raids, he wears a yellow cloth over his face and a black robe over his body, in his hand a rusting cage with flammable objects ripe for the burning and to be hurled at people at houses. Shintaro destroyed crops and stole innocent people's posessions. He was also Shinske's father.

Shinske's mother remains un-named. She always taught Shinske to be a good person, to keep away from the path his father taken. Shinske listened to her advice; he aspired to become a powerful warrior like his father, but work on the side of good.

Shinske was amused to see bright lights in the village at this time of the night. He wasn't amused when he found out they were caused by attackers that came to pillage the town. Shinske's father, Shintaro, thundered down into his room and warned him.

"Shinske, do not go down there. The men have come to repent blood debts. I may not come back, so protect your mother okay?"

Shinske said nothing. How could he refuse his father's command? He felt sick with sadness. Why did his father have to be the person he was? He watched Shintaro clamber out of his bedroom window. Perhaps this was the last time he would see his father.

Just as he was going to plunge into the darkness, Shintaro gestured to Shinske.

"Her son, take this."

He threw a chain necklace to Shinske. Shinske caught it, and waved his father goodbye. He followed his father with his eye, watching as his father came closer and closer to the invaders, until he became only a dark figure in the distance.

Shinske examined the necklace. The chain was light and thin, and a small, thin metal plate hung upon it, imprinted with an insignia which he did not know of.

*Note to self, dad has scar across his left eye, a result of a vicous accident.*

*Text edited, father now has scar. Scar will be used to identify this individual*

*Edit text to describe Shinske as a young boy, and then create a comparison of when he gets into the dungeon and when he escapes from the dungeon.*

Edited September 1, 2006 by Colonel_mustang

[Colonel_mustang 0]

Utara's early past 0.5, Chapter 2 of The Battle Realms Manga.

A girl was working in the fields, collecting medicinal herbs to cure her mother of the disease. She collected the flower pollen with her fregile, soft hands, and placed them into the wooden bowl. She then added a little water and mashed them with a stick, like a mortar and pestle. Brushing her long, dark hair away from her pretty face, she walked back inside the hut where she and her family lived. Approaching her mother, whom was resting on her bed, she offered the mashed flower pollen.

A figure rose from the bed. Groaning as if sitting upright was the hardest thing to do, she brang herself to speak to her child.

"Hello Utara" the young girl's mother childishly said, "What is this you have brang for me?"

The young girl replied. "Mummy, I have brung special herbs so you can heal from the sickness."

*To be continued, gotta get off comp!*

[[{BeatZ}]-BIG_aLvZ- 5]

hehe another br story good luck....

[Colonel_mustang 0]

Is it good? Please give your comments, and perhaps some interesting story concepts/plotlines to add. I am working in collaboration with my friend to possibly create a fully-fledged Battle Realms Manga. My friend doesn't know its about Battle Realms though. Ha!

Edit: Don't compare this story to the one you wrote, Alvz. Your story whoops mine's ass.

[Colonel_mustang 0]

today is my birthday i turn 14 AHAHAHAH! The party was awesome, all the friends come ova and had cake and pizza, got some gay bacardi breezers hahahHa! Luckily nobody thought the boys here homo lols!

To celebrate, you all have to post a funny image each! Here is my contribution:

[[{BeatZ}]-BIG_aLvZ- 5]

lol HAPPY BIRFDAY MAN heres ur present buddy...

LOLZ....

[{Dark}KaBuKI 2]

Ok heres mine happy birthday

[{Dark}WolfBite 2]

Happy Birthday! I wouldn't ask for a funny picture for my birthday gift.

it is pretty funny I guess.

[{Dark}KaBuKI 2]

i wannad show some more funny stuff here

http://www.explosm.net/movies/133/

and a pic

UPDATED I JUST GOT A VIDEO OF U PLAYING BATTLE REALMS.

[Speedy 11]

Happy Birthday! lol

[[{BeatZ}]-BIG_aLvZ- 5]

LOLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

[Colonel_mustang 0]

Best birthday presents! Awesome man.

[Nos 0]

Yay! Another fic writer!

Great job mustang. You Spanish or Mexican? You just need to improve your english more.

I'll give you a tip:

Just keep on writing, don't stop. Summarize the plot of one chapter by putting the ideas in short sentences then expand it as you write the real chapter.

like what you did here:

*Note to self, dad has scar across his left eye, a result of a vicous accident.*

*Text edited, father now has scar. Scar will be used to identify this individual*

*Edit text to describe Shinske as a young boy, and then create a comparison of when he gets into the dungeon and when he escapes from the dungeon.*

You are doing fine. Just don't forget to omit your plot summary from your posts. You just killed the suspense by revealing to us what will happen to Shinske next.

Go mustang!

Female mammary gland extensions, lol uber pr0n *fapfapfap*

Lol. High in testosterone huh? Visit my fic for some more education:

http://www.battlerealms.cc/forums/index.php?showtopic=357

[Colonel_mustang 0]

Hey cool, its Nos. Hey Nos, your cool. Thanks for the tips man.

*Needs more dialogue. I suck at dialogue.*

[BloodyMary 0]

omg baxter dya REALLY think THATS FUNNY??????

fuckin poor animalz there fu**in guyz who think thats funny -.-

[Speedy 11]

Not to everyones taste, but in some countrys they do that... They let an angry bull loose, if you get hurt too bad.

[{Dark}WolfBite 2]

Alvz, Please do not deviate from he topic...It was a simple post a picture thread.

[[{BeatZ}]-BIG_aLvZ- 5]

well u just did aswell wit dat post u jus posted....

sorry....

[Speedy 11]

He's a SuperMod he's got to Mod things hasn't he?

[Nos 0]

Hey cool, its Nos. Hey Nos, your cool. Thanks for the tips man.

*Needs more dialogue. I suck at dialogue.*

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Speaking of dialogue, a few minuites ago, I was watching Samurai X episodes in you tube. Try watching them, you can get a thing or two.

Samurai X is a good example of reframing other people's beliefs.

[{Dark}WolfBite 2]

it was a warning alvz...next time I wont be too congenial.

[[{BeatZ}]-BIG_aLvZ- 5]

lol wolfbite now that u a super mod u think u can boss me around...

its a spam topic sorry i said lolz in a spam topic and sorry 2 colonel mustang damm....

[IndominusRex 13]

Oh! Happy birthday! I am late?

Here's your present! Do you want to eat a hot dog in sandwich? or just a sandwich?

[Speedy 11]

Oh my god! BloodyMary is going to freak out when she sees that.